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dahlia_moon ([personal profile] dahlia_moon) wrote2006-08-17 10:52 pm
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[Poem] Shock waves

Shock waves

electricity runs through me
my human body tingles with anticipation
every nerve and muscle wants to burst

i've never felt like this before
it's all so new
and excruciatingly frightening

i've seen the dark side of the moon
and the bright side of you
but i've never felt like this before

i'm falling for you
but you're a black chasm
and i  keep falling

i keep falling
for you...
for you...
for...
you...



[identity profile] amethysth.livejournal.com 2006-08-18 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow... I really liked that. Did you write it? Because if you did, you have some amazing talent! ^^
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[identity profile] moon-destiny.livejournal.com 2006-08-18 10:52 pm (UTC)(link)
*Blushes* Yes, I did write that. I was inspired reading [livejournal.com profile] teatheory's poems. I like writing poems, but I just don't write them that often now.